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Friday, March 21, 2014
The empty beach By Tama
ORIGINAL SENTENCE: THE BEACH WAS EMPTY ON THIS STORMY DAY
IMPROVED SENTENCE: THE BEACH WAS EMPTY, ALTHOUGH WE STILL WERE HAVING A BBQ ON THIS STORMY DAY
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