Wednesday, March 12, 2014

Sentence of the Day

The grass gently swished as the strong breeze zoomed though.

By George

2 comments:

  1. Talofa room 9,
    What a good idea - sentence of the day - very simple but very effective. George your sentence made me think about that strong breeze zooming.....and I look out the window it blows still. Good sharing and love the posting from you and your friends. Fa for now Otalani

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  2. I really enjoy reading Room 9 writing.
    When I read this sentence I can see what you're explaining, in my head.
    I would love for you to come and share your story to Room 3 when you have finished it!
    Keep up the awesome work!
    Bryan ^_^

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