Thursday, March 6, 2014

Forgotten By Kahma

An medieval castle lies lifeless, the tall turret's point pricks through the rain, as the rusting iron portcullis       
slowly creaks open. The wooden drawbridge silently started to lower. I look down at the moat, the reflections of lost kings hide beneath the blurred water. 
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4 comments:

  1. UnknownMonday, March 10, 2014

    Hi Kahma,
    I really enjoyed reading this amazing piece of writing. I was able to draw a picture in my head by reading your words. What a writer you are!
    Courtney

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  2. AnonymousMonday, March 10, 2014

    Hi Kahma,
    Such a great piece of writing! I really love how you have used loads of WOW words!!!
    Keep it up :) Bryan.

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  3. Cassie and HollyWednesday, March 12, 2014

    Hi Kahma
    I love how you put in alot of WOW words
    By Cassie and Holly :D

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  4. RuthWednesday, March 12, 2014

    Talofa Kahma,
    what a fantastic writing you have done Kahma!! I absolutly love the way you have done amazing disciption in your writing you have out done your self keep up the good work.Azure

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