Monday, March 10, 2014

Power Surge By Liv

The deep rumbling started, I looked at Noush, she gave me an awkward smile as a worried response.

I looked cautiously at Mum, but soon enough she disappeared with a blur. 

Even though it was pitch black with my eyelids shut tight I could still hear my friends piercing screams.

I felt my shaking fingers gripping tighter the the craggy seat.


My throat felt like I swallowed a cloud.

Then I saw my mum, and Noush gave me a calm, happy smile and the the deep rumbling became lighter. 


2 comments:

  1. Hi Liv,
    I really enjoyed reading yuor story it is fantastic with all its adjectives.
    Great work!

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  2. Hi Liv,
    We really loved your awesome peice of writing
    BY Cassie + Holly

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