Power Surge By Liv
The deep rumbling started, I looked at Noush, she gave me an awkward smile as a worried response.
I looked cautiously at Mum, but soon enough she disappeared with a blur.
Even though it was pitch black with my eyelids shut tight I could still hear my friends piercing screams.
I felt my shaking fingers gripping tighter the the craggy seat.
My throat felt like I swallowed a cloud.
Then I saw my mum, and Noush gave me a calm, happy smile and the the deep rumbling became lighter.
Hi Liv,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading yuor story it is fantastic with all its adjectives.
Great work!
Hi Liv,
ReplyDeleteWe really loved your awesome peice of writing
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